From: Rich Brown <richb.hanover@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 18 Jul 2016 01:50:30 +0000 (-0400)
Subject: Editorial tweaks to "Getting Started" page
X-Git-Url: http://git.openwrt.org/?p=web.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=f68ec9679682c5d78a8bfeaa70cfaeaefbd2fb01

Editorial tweaks to "Getting Started" page
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diff --git a/_includes/docs_nav.html b/_includes/docs_nav.html
index 50a8233..d77f50c 100644
--- a/_includes/docs_nav.html
+++ b/_includes/docs_nav.html
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
                 <li{% if page.url == '/docs/uci_system.html' %} class="active"{% endif %}><a href="uci_system.html">System</a></li>
                 <li{% if page.url == '/docs/uci_wireless.html' %} class="active"{% endif %}><a href="uci_wireless.html">Wireless</a></li>
             </ul>
-            <li{% if page.url == '/docs/web_presence.html' %} class="active"{% endif %}><a href="web_presence.html">This Web Presence</a></li>
+            <li{% if page.url == '/docs/web_presence.html' %} class="active"{% endif %}><a href="web_presence.html">About These Web Pages</a></li>
 
         </ul>
     </div>
diff --git a/docs/index.txt b/docs/index.txt
index 2933f5e..912db51 100644
--- a/docs/index.txt
+++ b/docs/index.txt
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ LEDE ships without a password. Enter `passwd` and type the new password twice.
 _Note: Use a good password: it secures your home network.
 Write it on the bottom of the router so you don't forget._
 . *Connect the Wide Area Network (WAN) port of the router to "the internet".* +
-The router WAN port defaults to DHCP, so you can usually connect the new WAN port into your existing router's LAN port. The new router should then be "on the air."
+The router WAN port defaults to DHCP, so you can usually connect the  WAN port of your new router into a LAN port of your existing router. The new router should then be "on the air."
 . *Confirm internet connectivity* +
 Type `ping 8.8.8.8` (that is Google's DNS server.) If the previous step worked, you should see ping response messages.
 . *Update the packages, then install the LuCI web configuration package.* +
@@ -37,6 +37,6 @@ Go to https://192.168.1.1 to complete configuration.
 
 == Next Steps
 
-* Review the link:transcript.html[SSH Transcript] to see all the configuration messages above.
+* Review the link:transcript.html[SSH Transcript] to see all the messages from the configuration commands above.
 * Enable Wi-Fi in the router (LEDE ships with Wi-Fi turned off). See *Network -> Wireless* in the Web GUI.
 * Install other packages with `opkg install ...` Useful packages are snmpd, netperf, luci-app-sqm, and any of your favorites.
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